Bubbles rise...
She slides the easy water waybubbles rise from her parted lipsshe will never touch the sky againor feel the soothing rain.Life coasts down the smooth pathwaysucking in the awful painnever losing it's...
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felt the taking of this .... .... such words do tend to take one's breath away a definite pull!!
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Thank you. It was written to my husband's neice, who took a blanket and went into the woods...and slept the 'deep sleep' a couple years ago. she decorated her house for Christmas, and ...went away......
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There is almost a sense of acceptance in this slow and peaceful descent into darkness...but that last line shows an edge to these words......a deep, personal and haunting account of an untimely...
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VI a poignant piece breathtaking in its sorrow!!Welcome to The Maelstrom!!!!
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Welcome indeed to the Maelstrom, Vi! This is both painful and beautiful to read. You've somehow caught the rhythm of the event, and brought it vividly before us. Well done!Davie
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A strong read.With a defiant end I think.And yes welcom to the Maelstrom!A haunting piece to begin with..I hope to see more of your work!Yours with love,Alex
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Sometimes a person chooses to rejoin the all we may never know whybut we have not got the right to criticise what we d'n understand have we?
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I have seen times when I weakened, and wanted to. I guess the difference is..I didn't!! Life is a tough one. Either one weakens, or another grows stronger, and fights like hell!!! to beat the Thing(s)
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At 85, I am still fighting!!! but I proclaim myself a Winner...Life cannot beat me... Playing To Win Life is a game You play to win; It can be a flower Or a roaring, lusty wind, Molde...Read More
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This is one of those poems that grab at you and make you think about the written words and what they are saying. Very captivating indeed!Angel
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The poem, Playing to Win is supposed to center so it forms a tree. I still have not learned how to do that!!! Hugs to you all!
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